Hugo, While this is…
Hugo,
While this is a perfectly interesting reply to Steve, I can’t see how anything you’ve said here engages with the points that sophonisba raised. I don’t see anywhere in her comments where she criticizes a lack of overt anger or sarcasm in your writing; she objected to what she saw as the presentation of feminism as a form of faith (when actually it’s a political program that ought to be obvious by the light of natural reason), and to the presentation of it as uncomfortable, difficult, cold, suffocating, etc. I don’t see how that has anything to do with your tone, or your style, or whether your self-expressions happen to be genuine or prideful in any given case.